Emergence Haiku

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      1. I feel awful say this but lovely as the poem is it is not a Haiku. A haiku has seventeen syllables and is usually is set in three lines of 5/7/5 syllables. The content was perfect beautiful. I am sorry if you know this and I hope you don’t mind me saying.💜💜

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        1. Oh gosh no, I never mind. However, maybe I miscounted something as a syllable but because I do show 17. I think perhaps you might be counting the Title Emergence. Which is a good catch!!! I meant to remove it when I posted it because the title is already in.
          I am always welcome to criticism, and know that is how we grow. But I thought you were going to say your that your real name is not Willow!! Lol! Because I have been meaning to ask. 💞

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        2. I am sorry yes I was counting the title ! It is the perfect Haiku 💜💜. I am glad I have not offended you , I am always open to criticism as well it the way we learn . willow is my preferred name, you guessed not my real name. But I do use it 💜💜

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        5. That’s perfectly fine!!! You caught a boo boo any way and I am certain someone else will encounter the same challenge, if they already haven’t!!

          Looking forward to your reading new types of poetry!!!🤗

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I live and write in Fallbrook, CA, North County San Diego. I have followed an esoteric path since my teenage years, first practicing Carlos Castaneda and the Teachings of Don Juan, and then studying Gnostic Mysticism. Truly I am an eclectic mystic and am of the opinion that one must follow their heart as all paths with Love lead to where you are. Passionate about exploring different themes and modes of writing; I write poetry, prose, short stories and just started working on a novel. It is Sci Fi, and blends Time, realms, worlds, and human, alien and galactic consciousness. I hope you explore the site and enjoy the various threads and streamings. Thank you, Jordy