This haiku was inspired by Hélène Vaillant’s weekly “What do you see challenge?” For the week of September 25th.
If you’d like to participate or view posts link to https://helenevaillant.com/2018/09/25/what-do-you-see-sept-25-2018/
extended upwards
body and belly billow
through the luminous
Jordan 2018
Those lines did remind me of a rib cage 🙂
Clouds, some presence breathing.
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Luminaries ‘through the luminous’. I loved this.
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Thank you, so much Reena!
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Amazing haiku Jordan.
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Thank you, Hélène! Your lovely photo inspired it. Loved the clouds and gateway of light! 💗😍
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