This is my contribution to Hélène Vaillant’s weekly “What do you see?” Challenge.
If you would like to participate or view posts the link is. https://helenevaillant.com/2018/10/09/what-do-you-see-oct-9-2018/
Peaceful warriors
from ancient days
A time long ago
before the yellow-hided man came
to slaughter
with their dis-ease, plagues
and weapons
millions perished
Few remain
chosen by Gitchee Manitou,
the Great Spirit,
They are Sentinels
whose spirits forever guard
Michabo’s coming and going
Peaceful warriors
who remain as watchers
awaiting the day
when the yellow-hide
attempts to destroy the earth
They Guard the gates to spirit
and in time
will provide safe passage
for all believers of Nokomis,
Earth Goddess and daughter of the
moon*
The Sentinels, ever proud
standing tall
look out toward
the horizon
awaiting their call
© Jordan Fasheh
*reference to Nokomis from Cummins, J, (Algonquin Beliefs in Spirit and Nature), 2018
That was really wonderful Jordan. A wonderful vision! 💕
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Thank you, Christine!! 💗
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Well done! I like the repetition of “peaceful warriors” and “the sentinels” throughout the poem. It gives the piece continuity.
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Wow! No kidding. Great write.
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Thank you so much!💕
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this was splendid!
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Thank you for your kind thoughts Gina!
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Thank you, dear!💗
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Wonderful poem to capture the history and spirit!
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The word Sentinels is a perfect choice leading into your poem. I felt I had travelled through time while reading this. I especially loved how you integrate the Great Spirit of the Algonquins. Such a delightful poem Jordan. Thank you 😊.
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Thank you, Hélène! I learned a lot about the Alongquin people and their history. I love anything to do with the native indigenous people. Wonderful photo choice and thanks for sharing their history in Ottowa!
Jordan!💗
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Thank you for sharing your excellent poem Jordan.
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Thank you, Hélène!💕
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a brilliant take Jordan
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Love this Jordy it’s so strong! 💜
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Thank you, Willow! Ot took awhile to percolate.
Jordy💗
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The best ones always do 💜💜
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Ahh thank you, Willow! 💕
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